Feedback and Changes:
The feedback that I received from my last elevator pitch was all positive, indicating that most people really liked my pitch! I would appreciate some constructive criticism so that I can improve however, so feel free to speak your mind in the comments.
Since the feedback from the last elevator pitch was all positive, I didn't change much in order to address people's concerns. I did however add some more context to the pitch, adding in that OddJob would be more focused on college students and how it would work in a localized way.
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