Overall I think that the feedback I received last time I did my elevator pitch was quite good. There was no feedback that I thought was wrong. I was however surprised that many people that left feedback thought I was relaxed throughout most of the pitch. I believe this applies to any presentation, but when you look back on yourself it's much easier to identify a specific moment during which you were nervous than it is for others to identify.
Based off the feedback from last time I tried to keep my hands at my sides and express myself as clearly as possible in order to make the pitch look natural.
Please let me know what I can improve this time around!
Hi! I really like your idea i think it would be very useful to people, especially students but i think there is already an app for that... I'm sorry i cant remember the name of it but the logo is of a bumblebee and its UF bassed. The app basically offers rewards or payments to students that can get something done for another person...
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Hey Sebastian,
ReplyDeleteI totally agree with you on the nervousness. There have been many times where I thought I did poorly, but everyone else thinks I did fine. I think that it is great that you used the feedback that you received from you peers. Keep up the effort and enthusiasm!
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I feel like your idea would be especially great for college students. However, I think you should talk about a way to make sure that a user can trust someone they've contacted to do a job to avoid the negative aspects of craigslist. As far as the speech itself, try to get more comfortable with what you're saying and slow it down a bit. I had some trouble hearing what you were saying at points. Feel free to look at my post http://triedfortime.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-technically-1.html
ReplyDeleteHey Sebastian! I think your idea is so great and has a big market. College students absolutely need an app where they can get jobs via their smartphones. We are always looking for ways to make money! My only concern would be the safety of an idea like this. How would the students know that they are meeting up with people who are harmless? Implementing something like Angie’s List, a referral site, would be really helpful with getting this app to be more popular. Nice job! Also, feel free to look at my post http://ufentlaurenday.blogspot.com/2016/02/interviewing-customers-no-2.html
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